The other day I was writing the scene in my latest Work in Progress, and I noted that I tend to use some words or phrases quite a bit. In a conversation, people nod, shake their head, shrug, and so on. And as this is the first draft, it is quite normal to fall into using these words or phrases. But I was thinking rather than wait until my next round of editing, what words or actions could I use instead?
Well, a quick search on the internet led me to this blog post of 100+ Ways to say Shrug by Kathy Steinemann.
Here are the first lines of her post:
“Perhaps you rely on shrugs as action beats to differentiate between speakers in dialogue; or maybe you’re on an early draft, and you write the first thing that comes to mind.”
Eureka! She hit the nail on the head. This was just my problem. I quickly read her post where she gave easy explanations and plenty of examples.
Looking through the titles of other posts, I saw many that were interesting. Here are some posts I thought could help any writer:
100+ Ways to say Shrug – https://kathysteinemann.com/Musings/shrug/
200 Ways to say Shake the Head – https://kathysteinemann.com/Musings/shake-the-head/ (which in some societies is a positive thing rather than a negative)
200+ Alternatives for Wide Eyes – https://kathysteinemann.com/Musings/wide-eyes/
And it isn’t just phases such of these…here are some posts on verbs or adjectives.
350+ Ways to Replace the verb “Take” – https://kathysteinemann.com/Musings/take/
500+ Ways to Replace the verb “Make” – https://kathysteinemann.com/Musings/make/
200+ Ways to say Embarrassed – https://kathysteinemann.com/Musings/embarrassed/
150+ Ways to say Confused – https://kathysteinemann.com/Musings/confused/
150+ Ways to say Overwhelmed – https://kathysteinemann.com/Musings/overwhelmed/
150+ Ways to say Disappointed – https://kathysteinemann.com/Musings/disappointed/
200+ Ways to say Excited – https://kathysteinemann.com/Musings/excited/
And if you peruse her site, you might find even more helpful blog posts. I know I’ll be returning to read some of these…after – or maybe while – I work on finishing my first draft.